Change the Playground Essay- Student View on improvement of School’s Playground

This essay was written by my 11 years old boy and rated Awesome.My son got 30/30 marks.I hope this will help you to get some points to improve playground..

Power Upper Elementary’s playground needs a few improvements. The first improvement would be to reduce the height of the ropes and the playground structure.. Another would be to coat the poles in rubber. The final improvement would be to replace the wood chips with rubber. I believe that every playground should be safe for children to play on.

The first improvement would be to reduce the height of the ropes and the playground structure because if someone were to jump off at that height then they would be injured. Also sometimes short children would like to play on the playground structure and ropes so the height of the playground structure and ropes should reduce by about two feet.

The second improvement would be to coat the poles with about two inches of rubber so if someone were to hit any part of their body on the pole it would not hurt as much. Also it would provide a better grip o the poles so no one would fall or get hurt.
The final improvement would be to replace the wood chips with rubber because sometimes when it rains children slip on the wood chips and fall onto the mud. Another reason that the wood chips should be replaced with rubber is because if someone were to fall wood chips come into their shoe. If there was rubber instead of wood chips then fewer children would fall.

I believe every playground should be safe for children to play on. The playground of Power could use a few more improvements, but these are the major improvements that could be needed to make Power’s playground a safe place for everyone to play on and have fun.

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Animal Rights Essay-Middle school Essay

            

This is a persuasive essay about animal rights. Animals should be treated better because animals support human life, animals also feel pain, and animals are just like humans. I believe that animals should be treated fairly.

 

 

Animals support human life because they are used as food, their skins used as jewelry, purses, furniture, coats etc. Also sometimes animals are used as a comfort to children as pets. Also animals are cruelly used by some people for experiments, usually resulting in an animal’s pain or an animal’s demise and the human’s benefit.

 

 

Animals are also like humans because they eat, breathe and also feel pain. If you were to skin a beaver, dog, cat, or mink, the animal would feel pain. All animals were given birth by parents like all humans, and most of them feel a parents love like most humans.

 

 

People with very little or no money would have to hunt to feed their families so hunting in some regions of the world would be okay because people might have no jobs or ways to earn money or if there is no other way to find food.

 

Credit: This essay is written by my 11 year old boy.

 

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Spelling Test for Elementary and Middles School Kids-Test 2

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  1. In our ongoing effort for  vocabulary improvement, this is  second spelling test for 20 words. Again it is time to sit with your kids and give them this 20 mark test. If you have missed 1st test, here is a link –Spelling Test-1 This will help your kids in Word-master competition and spelling bee .
  1. Wolves
  2. Halves
  3. Knives
  4. Loaves
  5. Tomatoes
  6. Heroes
  7. Mosquitoes
  8. Potatoes
  9. Holiday
  10. Canoes
  11. Pianos
  12. Countries
  13. Factories
  14. bakeries
  15. Libraries
  16. Mysteries
  17. Industries
  18. Memories
  19. Echoes
  20. Voyages
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Online Spelling Test for Elementary and Middles School Kids

Spelling and vocabulary are a key factor of English language and also to improve literacy skills of our kids . Here is a list of few words that you can use for spelling test or dictation. If parents will not give time to their kids than who else will give? So sit with your kids and give this 20 mark test and know your kids level.

  1. mayor
  2. agent
  3. disobey
  4. neighborhood
  5. weighted
  6. straight
  7. remain
  8. entertain
  9. complain
  10. explain
  11. raincoat
  12. stain
  13. trace
  14. misplace
  15. invade
  16. escape
  17. hesitate
  18. congratulate
  19. parade
  20. safety
Are you done with this test? Please write your kids score in the comment box and also suggest your ideas to help our kids in the Academic field .

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Essay:A member of student council who has a fear of public speaking: For Middle School Kids

This essay is for middle school kids and it is about Fear of Public Speaking. Main ideas of an essay are given in this article so young adult will understand this topic.

This essay is written by my 11 years old boy and got 90%. It will help your kids too. Give him/her following ideas and make them write essay to improve his/her English language: Art grade.

Main ideas are: You always wanted to be a member of student council, but to do that you must make a speech in front of the whole school. You also have a fear of public speaking, will you take the risk or not?

I have always wanted to become a member of student council, but I am afraid of public speaking. I get nervous talking in front of a lot of people. I don’t have a very loud voice. I get embarrassed when I am stared at.

I am just like soon in “Full of Hot Air”, I don’t like speak in public, but I’ll speak in public if its necessary like giving a speech in front of the school saying “Vote for me for Student Council”.

I am like the Montgolfier brothers because I like to take risks and I like to ride in a hot-air balloon.

So, I’ve decided to make a speech because I want to be a member of student council.

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